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Friday 22 May 2015

Narrative Writing

The children were given a picture and had to plan and write a narrative using the correct structure.




Once upon a time there lived a highly trained king ninja called Harry. He lived in a forest with his beautiful wife Jess, but not far away
there lived a real evil dog called Nick.

First Harry trained his ninja skills to a higher level but it was too late evil  Nick had already burnt the huge green forest into deep red lava.
Harry needs to do something and fast!

Next thing Harry gets a huge brain storm now he knows what to do.
He rushed to Jess and they build a huge water tank but they have one
problem how will we tip it over the tank full of water. James rushed to the tower of awesomeness to get everyone.

Finally Harry and his crew pushed over the tank and killed the evil
dog Nick and they lived happily ever after.

By Luke Edge



Cat king is the king of cats. The king lived in a new brown brick castle and he had swords and cannons.
One day an evil dragon stole the cat princess. The cat king sent a brave cat prince to save the princess. The prince had a long journey ahead to save the princess from the dragons shadowy dark hideout in a deep spooky forest.
The prince found the hideout and the dragon showed up and the princess said, “help me prince!!” The dragon and the prince fought. The prince killed the dragon with his sword through his heart.
The prince and princess returned to the castle and they lived happily ever after!


By Terei

In a castle in a far away land in the middle of nowhere, there grew a candy kingdom. In that
candy kingdom was a candy castle, it grew goodie- goodie gum drops, gob- stoppers and
especially candy for King Fur-ball and Queen Fudge.
In a land close by was Wart-ville. The ruler was Queen Ding-dong the witch. She was nasty and mean as were her loyal subjects the evil bunnies, they were so mean too.
She made everything in her path turn to stone.
“She is so mean,” Queen Fudge said.
“I know and she takes our mice too and turns them into frogs,” said King Fur-ball.
“Her dragon even took our daughter Cotton.” The Queen said angrily.
“Send the guards to look for her!”
Ding - dong saw them coming so she set a trap but the guards were too fast and trapped the witch in the trap. They got princess Cotton back and they all happily ever after in candy kingdom.   
by Sophia.

1 comment:

  1. King Fur-Ball, King Cat, and King Ninga Harry - I loved reading about your interesting characters Room 7!

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