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Tuesday, 2 June 2015

We have been learning about how to write narratives. Here are some of our published stories.

The Two Dragons
Once upon a time there were two  dragons one good and one evil. One of them lived in a cave in a dark cave it was the evil dragon. The good dragon lived in a cave too but it is not as bad as the evil dragons. They do not look alike. The good dragon has a purple body and a spiky tail. The evil dragon has a red body and a red tail. The good dragon has a baby dragon, it was only one years old.

One day the baby dragon was gone the dad knew it was the bad dragon called Drake he had wanted to steal the baby for ages. The dad was furious. He ran to the other cave on the other side of the forest. The baby was crying for her dad it was in a little cage. The two dragon fought they both were very, very strong and they were hitting each other with  their tails. The good dragon knocked Drake the bad dragon out with one whack to the head. Next the good dragon got the baby and they never saw Drake ever again.

By Deevon

The King and the wizard.
The king lived in a ginormous, white brick castle
and the wizard lived in a spooky, tall black tower.
The king and the queen sat on red thrones.
The wizard stole the crown from the king that night and
the king said, “where is my crown?”
The king sent a knight to get the crown back.
The knight had a long journey ahead.
He rode his horse past the river of snakes and past the trees of dragons.
The knight found the tower. The knight and the wizard
fought and the knight killed the wizard and the knight
returned to the castle with the crown and they lived happily ever after.

The End
By Terei

Crystals The cat & wolf
Once upon a time there was a wolf. He was a big bad
wolf who lived in a dark, spooky forest. The wolf lived in bushes that he liked, so he went to sleep.

A dragon lived in a forest but in a different forest so one day he walked along looking for food.
He saw the wolf sleeping in his bush and gobbled him up.
The dragon found fruit like lemons, watermelon, kiwifruit and bananas. so he ate them and he thought that he liked them, but he did not like them. So he had no more food.

The end.

By Crystal

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