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Tuesday 31 May 2016

Narrative writing

We are learning to write a narrative.
Our picture inspiration:

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(Ball. M. (2005).  Footrot Flats: Sports Edition.  pp 129.)

The World Cup
Once there lived two rugby players called Mitchel and
Jack. Jack was the strongest at rugby. Mitchell was the fastest at rugby. They played at Ohaeawai rugby club. Jack was a fat wide man, Mitchell was a skinny tall man.

One day Mitchell and Jack played for the All Blacks. They were playing against England. The All Blacks star Jack ran and bowled England over and scored a try. Next Mitchell stepped England and he scored a try too. Then England got the ball and nearly scored a try but Mitchell and Jack saved the try.

Finally they scored a two man try and they got the World Cup and that was the end of the rugby.

By Mitchel
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Playing Rugby

Once there lived two boys called Cole and Rick who liked to go to the ruby field to play rugby. Cole was skinny and white. Rick was fat and brown. They both wore black gumboots when they played rugby.  

One Sunday morning at the rugby game, the people were cheering for Cole and Rick’s teams. Cole scored five tries and Rick scored seven tries. Cole’s team lost the first half. Rick’s team lost the second half and the score was even.

At the end with a minute to play. Cole kicked the ball into the air. Coles gumboot landed into Rick's face then he landed into a big pile of cow poo. It went slop then Cole said to Rick, “are you alright?”

By Reagan

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Stinky Boys

Once there were two little boy’s, their names were Lukas and Finn. They played at Ohaeawai rugby club. Lukas was fat and as tall as a tree. He was very good at kicking rugby balls. Fin was skinny, they were both very, very stinky. They had a black and white dog, his name was Max. He liked to roll in cow poo.

One day at rugby it started pouring with rain.They did not have any towels. So they got drenched with rain. They like to be stinky but the stinky was gone. They did not like it at all. They ran to the trash and they got as stingy as possible.

All the other people ran away blocking their noses. But Lukas and Fin were so excited and happy.

By Brooke

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Playing rugby

Once two little boy’s were playing rugby in Ohaeawai. They were called Max and Ben. Max was the smart one and Ben was the hairy one. Ben did not know how to play rugby at all so Max trained Ben. “Oh no!”yelled Max. “There is cow poop behind you!” Flop! Ben slipped in the poo.
“I told you!” laughed Max. “Hahaha. You slipped in cow poo!”
“I’m going home.’’ Shouted Ben.

By AnneLise

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5 comments:

  1. Wow Lukas that is the longest story I have seen you write :) Well done.

    Brooke, the dog will be just as stinky as the boys :)

    Michelle (mum)

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  2. Oh Brooke I will make sure that Fin doesn't come to school stinky especially for you! 😀

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  3. Fin would love to see your The Fight writing up here so that I can share it with your family overseas.

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  4. Fin would love to see your The Fight writing up here so that I can share it with your family overseas.

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  5. Oh Brooke I will make sure that Fin doesn't come to school stinky especially for you! 😀

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