We are TEAM AWA! A collaborative learning group of Year 3 and 4 students. Our teachers are Mrs Clarke in Room 2 and Mrs Craig in Room 1. This is the blog for Room 2. Please check out room1ohaeawai.blogspot.co.nz too.
Nau mai, haere mai ki to matou mahi o ruma tahi me te rua.
Tuesday, 31 May 2016
We are learning to write a narrative.
Our picture inspiration:
(Ball. M. (2005). Footrot Flats: Sports Edition. pp 129.)
Once there lived two boys called Harold and Dankata at the Kaikohe rugby field. Harold had brown hair and Dankata had black hair. Dankata had a special rugby ball and Harold had brown skin and Dankara had brown skin too. Dankata did a big kick, the ball went in the sky and the ball got in the tree. Dankata had to climb the big tree. The ball popped out. Dankata starts running away. The two boys had fun and one of the boys had a stuck foot and he threw the ball and then they got Harold’s foot out of the hole. Harold kicked the ball in Dankata’s face. The boys had fun kicking the special ball and he couldn’t get his gumboot out of the deep deep hole. He had red boots with a black and white rugby jacket. He was so fast he could get a try. The two boys pulled Harold’s gumboot out of the hole. They lived happily ever after.
By Lukas _________________________________________________________________________
Once upon a time there lived a dog Jay, Mitchel was the skinny one and Jack the fat one. It was 12 o'clock. It was loud Jay was playing in the mud. “Pass it to me " said Jack, “no I willkick it to you " yelled Mitchel. So he did and the boot landed on Jack's face but he took it of f and ran to the try line, then he tripped and Mitchel scored the try.
Once there lived two Ohaeawai football players, who played for the Warriors and the All Blacks. The All Blacks cheered for them. The skinny one is called Shon Joshin. The fat one is called Johnny Bo who has a dog and it is lying in the cow poo. The cow stood on Johnny Bo, he had to go to the hospital. Then Shon Joshin had to go back to the NRL. Johnny Bo got back from the hospital and he could play rugby again but Shon Joshin wasn't there.
Once upon a time it was a sunny day. The fat dude was Fin and he slipped over the ball, Then the ball hit Fin in the face. Fin fell over and Jack kicked the ball very high. Jack got hit from the ball then Fin got up and he picked up Jack . They went to McDonald's, Fin and Jack got chips and pudding.