tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3211846885943655074.post8674808180894275365..comments2017-08-02T12:13:41.914+12:00Comments on Hive of Learning: Narrative WritingOhaeawai Schoolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05020368522232185796noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3211846885943655074.post-53729464830238718422016-08-03T11:57:27.596+12:002016-08-03T11:57:27.596+12:00Hi my name is Ashley from Ruma Ono at Kaniere Scho...Hi my name is Ashley from Ruma Ono at Kaniere School and I like your because it is a book. By AshleyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3211846885943655074.post-8192962124492592862016-07-28T13:36:36.618+12:002016-07-28T13:36:36.618+12:00Hi
I loved reading your writing. You are getting ...Hi <br />I loved reading your writing. You are getting very clever at writing narratives. I was most impressed with your punctuation too. I hope you are going to write some more narratives for us to read.<br />From Mrs WhitelawAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3211846885943655074.post-52165278777721304212016-06-14T11:27:27.363+12:002016-06-14T11:27:27.363+12:00Hi, we can see that you enjoyed writing a narrativ...Hi, we can see that you enjoyed writing a narrative based on the picture. We really liked how you wrote the stories. They were funny. We really liked the bit about someone getting kicked in the face. Great capital letters and full stops! You could always try adding in some more adjectives. From Te Pihinga at Yaldhurst Model School.Mrs Spragghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02820128219418363373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3211846885943655074.post-8359760986081142462016-05-31T13:42:47.708+12:002016-05-31T13:42:47.708+12:00Well done with your narrative writing. Including t...Well done with your narrative writing. Including talking/speech made it interesting to read. Lukus, where did Dankata got his special ball from and why is it special?<br />From Ms Bennett, Room 6, Park Estate SchoolGretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03855201961596096988noreply@blogger.com