Hive of Learning: May 2016

Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Narrative Writing

We are learning to write a narrative.

Our picture inspiration:

(Ball. M. (2005). Footrot Flats: Sports Edition. pp 129.)

Once there lived two boys called Harold and Dankata at the Kaikohe rugby field. Harold had brown hair and Dankata had black hair. Dankata had a special rugby ball and Harold had brown skin and Dankara had brown skin too. Dankata did a big kick, the ball went in the sky and the ball got in the tree. Dankata had to climb the big tree. The ball popped out. Dankata starts running away. The two boys had fun and one of the boys had a stuck foot and he threw the ball and then they got Harold’s foot out of the hole. Harold kicked the ball in Dankata’s face. The boys had fun kicking the special ball and he couldn’t get his gumboot out of the deep deep hole. He had red boots with a black and white rugby jacket. He was so fast he could get a try. The two boys pulled Harold’s gumboot out of the hole. They lived happily ever after.

By Lukas
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Once upon a time there lived a dog Jay, Mitchel was the skinny one and Jack the fat one. It was 12 o'clock. It was loud Jay was playing in the mud. “Pass it to me " said Jack, “no I will kick it to you " yelled Mitchel. So he did and the boot landed on Jack's face but he took it of f and ran to the try line, then he tripped and Mitchel scored the try.

By Lakin
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All blacks

Once there lived two Ohaeawai football players, who played for the Warriors and the All Blacks. The All Blacks cheered for them. The skinny one is called Shon Joshin. The fat one is called Johnny Bo who has a dog and it is lying in the cow poo. The cow stood on Johnny Bo, he had to go to the hospital. Then Shon Joshin had to go back to the NRL. Johnny Bo got back from the hospital and he could play rugby again but Shon Joshin wasn't there.

By Brooklyn

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Once upon a time it was a sunny day. The fat dude was Fin and he slipped over the ball, Then the ball hit Fin in the face. Fin fell over and Jack kicked the ball very high. Jack got hit from the ball then Fin got up and he picked up Jack . They went to McDonald's, Fin and Jack got chips and pudding.

By Anthony

Narrative writing

We are learning to write a narrative.

Our picture inspiration:

(Ball. M. (2005). Footrot Flats: Sports Edition. pp 129.)

The World Cup

Once there lived two rugby players called Mitchel and

Jack. Jack was the strongest at rugby. Mitchell was the fastest at rugby. They played at Ohaeawai rugby club. Jack was a fat wide man, Mitchell was a skinny tall man.

One day Mitchell and Jack played for the All Blacks. They were playing against England. The All Blacks star Jack ran and bowled England over and scored a try. Next Mitchell stepped England and he scored a try too. Then England got the ball and nearly scored a try but Mitchell and Jack saved the try.

Finally they scored a two man try and they got the World Cup and that was the end of the rugby.

By Mitchel

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Playing Rugby

Once there lived two boys called Cole and Rick who liked to go to the ruby field to play rugby. Cole was skinny and white. Rick was fat and brown. They both wore black gumboots when they played rugby.

One Sunday morning at the rugby game, the people were cheering for Cole and Rick’s teams. Cole scored five tries and Rick scored seven tries. Cole’s team lost the first half. Rick’s team lost the second half and the score was even.

At the end with a minute to play. Cole kicked the ball into the air. Coles gumboot landed into Rick's face then he landed into a big pile of cow poo. It went slop then Cole said to Rick, “are you alright?”

By Reagan

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Stinky Boys

Once there were two little boy’s, their names were Lukas and Finn. They played at Ohaeawai rugby club. Lukas was fat and as tall as a tree. He was very good at kicking rugby balls. Fin was skinny, they were both very, very stinky. They had a black and white dog, his name was Max. He liked to roll in cow poo.

One day at rugby it started pouring with rain.They did not have any towels. So they got drenched with rain. They like to be stinky but the stinky was gone. They did not like it at all. They ran to the trash and they got as stingy as possible.

All the other people ran away blocking their noses. But Lukas and Fin were so excited and happy.

By Brooke

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Playing rugby

Once two little boy’s were playing rugby in Ohaeawai. They were called Max and Ben. Max was the smart one and Ben was the hairy one. Ben did not know how to play rugby at all so Max trained Ben. “Oh no!”yelled Max. “There is cow poop behind you!” Flop! Ben slipped in the poo.

“I told you!” laughed Max. “Hahaha. You slipped in cow poo!”

“I’m going home.’’ Shouted Ben.

By AnneLise

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Friday, 20 May 2016

Pink Shirt Day

Today was Pink Shirt day for Bullying awareness. These children planned and made their own video about bullying. Well done boys and their camera person Leonor.